[hearty]

Well I have a essay due tomorrow and its only five paragrapgs I'm not asking you for an answer but... I need help...

It is about death penalty and I think their should be...

My three reason are...

1. it saves us space and money
2. it brings colsure to the victims family
3. and it's a detterance to others from committing crimes...

I need help on making paragraphs about these reasons...

THANKS...

[mum2five]

You need to now explain your reasons in full details to how you personaly feel.
Space and money I assume as Prisons are over crowded and money as it is the tax payers who fund the cost of prisinors.
Closure I am unsure of as not sure closure is ever brought even when justice is done but I agree a life for a life
As for making the death penalty put others off then yes perhaps is this was what happened maybe people would think twice.

[hearty]

Thanks it helped me...

[Nestorian]

thanks it helped me ...........

Rather than closure say it helps make people feel "safer"


Good luck.

[Nestorian]

I'd write it like, The death penalty benafits society in 3 basic ways; 1) space and money... 2) gives people the feeling of security... 3) And deturance from others committing crimes.

Ending, No one has the "right" to take a life, but some times it is more benaficial to end some one's suffering.

Peace be with you.

P.S. I'm not for the death penalty. But that's OK, We all have our opinions. ;)

[hearty]

Thanks... but I'm trying to get them into paragraphs that's why

[Nestorian]

thanks.... but im trying to get them into paragraphs thats why

You may have missed what I meant. Sorry I tend to be a bit scattered. My apologies.

"I'd write it like,

(opening paragraph, the thesis statment.) The death penalty benafits society in 3 basic ways; 1) space and money... 2) gives people the feeling of security... 3) And deturance from others committing crimes.

1) space and money...

2) gives people the feeling of security...

3) And deturance from others committing crimes.


(concluding statement.) Ending, No one has the "right" to take a life, but some times it is more benaficial to end some one's suffering."



That's just a general out line. A thesis is "a promis to your reader telling them what you are going to write about." -- My english teacher in college.

Was that what you meant, or am I just lost? Its OK, id get lost in my closet if I could get in it. ;)

Peace be with you.

[hearty]

Ohhh hehehehhe that's OK THANKS...